Which sentence has the most traditional syntax?

The mother, twisting and waiting quietly, her ring circled a pale finger.

The mother waited quietly, twisting her ring around a pale finger.

Waiting quietly and twisting her ring, the mother had a pale finger.

With quiet waiting, the mother twisted her ring around a pale finger

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Valentina Horne

28 January, 02:55

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Carlos Dunn · Answer 1

Carlos Dunn 28 January, 06:16

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I think the third one makes sense