You are asked to revise this sentence so it contains no dangling or misplaced modifiers.

After a long walk in the hot sun, a lovely shade tree came into view.

Which choice is the best answer?

There is no revision needed. The original sentence is correct as it is.

After a long walk in the hot sun, I saw a beautiful shade tree come into view.

A lovely shade tree came into view after a long walk in the hot sun.

Coming into view after a long walk in the hot sun was a beautiful shade tree.

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Gina Nguyen

5 November, 13:18

You are asked to revise this sentence so it contains no dangling or misplaced modifiers.

After a long walk in the hot sun, a lovely shade tree came into view.

Which choice is the best answer?

There is no revision needed. The original sentence is correct as it is.

After a long walk in the hot sun, I saw a beautiful shade tree come into view.

A lovely shade tree came into view after a long walk in the hot sun.

Coming into view after a long walk in the hot sun was a beautiful shade tree.

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Answers (2)

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Isabel Owens · Answer 1

After a long walk in the hot sun, I saw a beautiful shade tree come into view.

Slade Massey · Answer 2

Revive sentence so this sentence is dead okay ill revive it

the answer is After a long walk in the hot sun, I saw a beautiful shade tree come into view.