Coach Perry told Tyler he had previously coached basketball when he was on the swim team

Which revision clarifies the confusing pronoun in this sentence?

When he was on the swim team, Coach Perry told him that he had previously coached basketball.

Coach Perry told him he had previously coached basketball when Tyler was on the swim team.

When Tyler was on the swim team, Coach Perry told him that he had previously coached basketball.

He told Tyler he had previously coached basketball when Tyler was on the swim team.

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Elianna

3 December, 13:47

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Isaac Travis · Answer 1

The second one is correct because it still says both ideas correctly but also puts them together to make a less confusing sentence.

Kaiden Aguirre · Answer 2

I believe the answer here would be C. When Tyler was on the swim team, Coach Perry told him that he had previously coached basketball.