Although you may not have received the e-mail we have been informed that the division head of the Finance Department is leaving at the end of the month.

Choose the best revision of the previous sentence.

(A) Although you may not have received the e-mail we have been informed that the division head of the Finance Department is leaving at the end of the month.

(B) Although you may not have received the e-mail, we have been informed that the division head of the Finance Department is leaving at the end of the month.

(C) Although you may not have received the e-mail we have been informed, that the division head of the Finance Department, is leaving at the end of the month.

(D) Although you may not have received the e-mail, we have been informed, that the division head of the Finance Department is leaving, at the end of the month.

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Jessie Mcclain

16 March, 08:09

Although you may not have received the e-mail we have been informed that the division head of the Finance Department is leaving at the end of the month.

Choose the best revision of the previous sentence.

(A) Although you may not have received the e-mail we have been informed that the division head of the Finance Department is leaving at the end of the month.

(B) Although you may not have received the e-mail, we have been informed that the division head of the Finance Department is leaving at the end of the month.

(C) Although you may not have received the e-mail we have been informed, that the division head of the Finance Department, is leaving at the end of the month.

(D) Although you may not have received the e-mail, we have been informed, that the division head of the Finance Department is leaving, at the end of the month.

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Jaqueline Case · Answer 1

B.

Explanation:

The sentence is too long and it is missing proper punctuations (like a comma). Reading it without punctuation does not provide room for breathing and therefore needs editing. It will be correct if framed like this; Although you may not have received the e-mail, we have been informed that the division head of the Finance Department is leaving at the end of the month. This sentence has a comma in the right place.