Which statement should be revised for a more formal tone? Artemis wasn't great to have around because she's the one who brought death and disease everywhere. Artemis and Apollo, her twin brother, were armed with bows, quivers, and arrows in battle. Artemis never fell in love and remained unmarried, remaining a symbol of purity and holiness. Artemis was considered the goddess of wild animals, hunting, and the natural world.

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Richard Meyers

13 March, 16:21

Which statement should be revised for a more formal tone? Artemis wasn't great to have around because she's the one who brought death and disease everywhere. Artemis and Apollo, her twin brother, were armed with bows, quivers, and arrows in battle. Artemis never fell in love and remained unmarried, remaining a symbol of purity and holiness. Artemis was considered the goddess of wild animals, hunting, and the natural world.

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Rollins · Answer 1

I believe the first sentence needs to be revised.

Tania Hall · Answer 2

A. Artemis wasn’t great to have around because she’s the one who brought death and disease everywhere.

Question A should be revised because it contains contractions.