Read the sentence and answer the following question: I have many beliefs about how the traffic light system could perform better. Which revision would make this sentence more precise?

I believe small changes to the timing would improve this traffic light system.

I have some changes that I believe would make the traffic light system work better.

If the traffic light system can be addressed, I have some ideas that would make it better.

The traffic light system would perform better if my beliefs were heard.

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25 March, 05:36

Read the sentence and answer the following question: I have many beliefs about how the traffic light system could perform better. Which revision would make this sentence more precise?

I believe small changes to the timing would improve this traffic light system.

I have some changes that I believe would make the traffic light system work better.

If the traffic light system can be addressed, I have some ideas that would make it better.

The traffic light system would perform better if my beliefs were heard.

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Elias Randolph · Answer 1

First of all, what is "precise?"

"Precise" means that you want to find a sentence that has more details, but not paraphrasing.

Here we have four sentences.

But if you look, only sentence A has more details about the traffic light system.