Which phrase in this thesis should be eliminated because it is unnecessary padding or fluff

everyday in America, in the daytime and in the nighttime, more and more families are facing economic hardship

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Allyson Church

26 July, 08:55

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Jack Wilkerson · Answer 1

"in the daytime and in the nighttime" can be eliminated.

Helena Morales · Answer 2

Instead of more and more, you can just say many.

You can delete in the daytime and nighttime

Which phrase in this thesis should be eliminated because it is unnecessary padding or fluffeveryday in America, in the daytime and in the nighttime, more and more families are facing economic hardship