Read the sentence.

I love the thrill of jumping out of an airplane, pulling the parachute's rip cord, and a smooth landing.

Which revision corrects the faulty parallelism in the sentence?

I love the thrill of an airplane jump, pulling the parachute's rip cord, and a smooth landing.

I love the thrill of jumping out an airplane, the pull of the parachute's rip cord, and landing smoothly.

I love the thrill of jumping out of an airplane, pulling the parachute's rip cord, and landing smoothly.

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Imani Bass

8 February, 21:32

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Answers (2)

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Lassie · Answer 1

love the thrill of jumping out of an airplane, pulling the parachute’s rip cord, and landing smoothly.

Brenden Barber · Answer 2

Sentence 3 would be correct, I believe.