Amber's paper on the Civil War has strong ideas, but they do not flow logically. How should she revise her paper?

A. She should restructure the paragraphs to change the sequence.

B. She should adjust the choice of words to make the tone more formal.

C. She should add stronger details and more precise, colorful language.

D. She should correct any mistakes in spelling or grammar.

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Kamora Lynn

5 April, 08:20

Amber's paper on the Civil War has strong ideas, but they do not flow logically. How should she revise her paper?

A. She should restructure the paragraphs to change the sequence.

B. She should adjust the choice of words to make the tone more formal.

C. She should add stronger details and more precise, colorful language.

D. She should correct any mistakes in spelling or grammar.

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Teagan Davidson · Answer 1

A sounds most reasonable ... but i may be wrong.

Russell · Answer 2

Hey there! Here's my opinion, I think it's A knowing that the Civil War was a great historical moment (I think XD) and the sequences are really important, without those sequences happening it would have happened!