Which revision fixes the dangling modifier in this sentence?

While walking to school almost a mile in the wet, heavy snow, the weather was miserable.

1) While walking to school almost a mile in the heavy, wet snow, the weather was miserable.

2) While I was walking almost a mile to school, the weather was miserable, with wet, heavy snow.

3) The weather was miserable while walking to school almost a mile in the wet, heavy snow.

4) Almost a mile in the wet, heavy snow, while I was walking to school, the weather was miserable.

Question

Roselyn Larson

28 March, 11:17

+2

Answers (2)

Know the Answer?

Aidyn · Answer 1

The answer would most likely be "The weather was miserable while walking to school almost a mile in the wet, heavy snow."

Topaz · Answer 2

A. while Walking to school almost a mile in the heavy, wet snow, the weather was miserable