Poem analyzing?

as we pass a white piece of paper

above the thin gray walls

the final word is written out

and our time of sharing ends

good night in breathy words escaped his lips

then for a second that seem as though a year

nothing but silence filled the air.

then after decades of holding my breath

his kills the silence.

the sweet and solemn sound of his slow breath

fills my ears at a low hum

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Ryleigh Gamble

19 January, 08:43

Poem analyzing?

as we pass a white piece of paper

above the thin gray walls

the final word is written out

and our time of sharing ends

good night in breathy words escaped his lips

then for a second that seem as though a year

nothing but silence filled the air.

then after decades of holding my breath

his kills the silence.

the sweet and solemn sound of his slow breath

fills my ears at a low hum

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Andrade · Answer 1

Dang!

Explanation:

that's a mood.

I like it.

I always write about people whispering in my poetry ... mostly because its a good word to use when writing about braking silence ... Luv It!