How does descriptive language improve your

understanding of the scene in which Paul races the

grey?

In the story the land

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Susan Lawson

2 January, 03:27

How does descriptive language improve your

understanding of the scene in which Paul races the

grey?

In the story the land

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Kiara Lloyd · Answer 1

The description during the horse race improves the scene by making me feel as though I am in the action and experiencing events at the same time Paul is. I can see Paul taking note of what is around him as he and the grey pass one horse at a time. The description of the horse sizzling like lightning makes Paul's win seem really exciting.

Mike Burke · Answer 2

The description during the horse race improves the scene by making me feel as though I am in the action and experiencing events at the same time Paul is. I can see Paul taking note of what is around him as he and the grey pass one horse at a time. The description of the horse sizzling like lightning makes Paul's win seem really exciting.

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How does descriptive language improve yourunderstanding of the scene in which Paul races thegrey?In the story the land

How does descriptive language improve your

understanding of the scene in which Paul races the

grey?

In the story the land