Which revision best uses a phrase to combine the first two

sentences?

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Startling me, a raccoon crawled into one of the trash cans

behind my house last night.

A raccoon last night startled me when it crawled into one

of the trash cans behind my house.

Last night, when it crawled into one of the trash cans

behind my house, a raccoon startled me.

Last night, I was startled by a raccoon that had crawled

into one of the trash cans behind my house.

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Harmony Perez

4 March, 07:33

Which revision best uses a phrase to combine the first two

sentences?

O

Startling me, a raccoon crawled into one of the trash cans

behind my house last night.

A raccoon last night startled me when it crawled into one

of the trash cans behind my house.

Last night, when it crawled into one of the trash cans

behind my house, a raccoon startled me.

Last night, I was startled by a raccoon that had crawled

into one of the trash cans behind my house.

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Answers (2)

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Macey Mckay · Answer 1

Last night, when it crawled into one of the trash cans

behind my house, a raccoon startled me.

Phoenix Arellano · Answer 2

Last night, when it crawled into one of the trash cans behind my house, a raccoon startled me.

Explanation:

This combination is grammarly correct, because the events and subjects are present with a logical syntax.

Punctuation signs are perfectly used, giving to the statement the proper sense about the expression that they writer wanted to transmit to the reader.