For each of the following sentences, choose the option that makes the message more reader oriented.

1. We have approved your credit application. The new card is enclosed.

2. Your credit application has been approved. Enclosed you'll find your new credit card.

3. No change necessary. Our records show your credit application has been approved. Enclosed you'll find your new credit card.

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Richard

21 January, 23:18

For each of the following sentences, choose the option that makes the message more reader oriented.

1. We have approved your credit application. The new card is enclosed.

2. Your credit application has been approved. Enclosed you'll find your new credit card.

3. No change necessary. Our records show your credit application has been approved. Enclosed you'll find your new credit card.

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Clancy · Answer 1

Answer:number 1

Explanation:The sentence catches the reader's attention because it is short and precise and the reader will like to see the content of the letter further.