English

Katie

25 March, 23:32

What is the best way to revise the last sentence?

Read the sentences from a student's essay about "The

Treasure of Lemon Brown.

The thugs say that they don't wish to harm Lemon Brown.

But they plan to attack him, showing that their greed is

more powerful than their humanity.

change "But they plan " to "However, they still plan"

change "But they plan to 'In conclusion, they plan

change "But they plan to "Finally, they still plan"

change "But they plan to 'Then they plan