Which is the most effective thesis statement for an essay titled "My Greatest Adventure"?

A) In order to kayak, you must have stamina, strength, and courage.

B) Because I'm afraid of the water, kayaking on the ocean was my greatest adventure.

C) Kayaking in Oahu was my greatest adventure because I conquered my fear and had new experiences.

D) Kayaking is a great adventure because it challenges your fears and brings you closer to ocean creatures.

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Abby Wood

22 August, 00:35

Which is the most effective thesis statement for an essay titled "My Greatest Adventure"?

A) In order to kayak, you must have stamina, strength, and courage.

B) Because I'm afraid of the water, kayaking on the ocean was my greatest adventure.

C) Kayaking in Oahu was my greatest adventure because I conquered my fear and had new experiences.

D) Kayaking is a great adventure because it challenges your fears and brings you closer to ocean creatures.

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Raul Shepard · Answer 1

The correct answer is a. a description of Jack London's attempts to learn how to surf

He saw surfers as he traveled through Hawaii and was amazed by their skill and how they looked and behaved so he decided to describe them and explain how surfing works and what it is. He tried and he failed and got advice which was also presented in the excerpt.