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28 April, 16:40

is my English correct? '' A caring, kind pet lover is wanted to care for my cat while I'm away for two weeks. This furry cat is well-behaved and will rub against your legs with its cream-tipped tail. Its food and bed will be provided.''

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  1. 28 April, 18:47
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    A caring, kind pet lover is wanted to care for my cat while I'm away for two weeks. This furry cat is well-behaved and will rub against your legs with its cream-tipped tail. Its food and bed will be provided.

    Explanation:

    I think it's good it doesn't need anything but if you want instead of the comma after caring you can just say A caring and kind ...

    or instead of care you can say look after

    so A caring and kind pet lover is wanted to look after ...
  2. 28 April, 19:18
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    A caring, kind pet lover is wanted to care for my cat while I'm away for two weeks. This furry cat is well-behaved and will rub against your legs with its cream-tipped tail. Its food and bed will be provided.

    Explanation:

    'Caring' and 'kind' mean the same thing, so using both words is redundant.

    To use the infinitive 'to care' is also redundant if you use the word 'care.'

    If a person is 'kind,' then he/she loves all people and animals, so that is redundant.

    A pet lover is wanted to care for my cat while I'm away for two weeks.

    A pet lover is wanted to look after my cat while I'm away for two weeks.
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