Which revision changes the sentence to draw attention to the object of the action rather than the people or things

performing the action?

O The "space race" by competing scientists occurred

during the Cold War.

During the Cold War, scientists led the "space race"

competition.

During the Cold War "space race," scientists competed.

O The "space race" was a Cold War competition by

scientists.

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Tommy Hess

2 February, 06:01

Which revision changes the sentence to draw attention to the object of the action rather than the people or things

performing the action?

O The "space race" by competing scientists occurred

during the Cold War.

During the Cold War, scientists led the "space race"

competition.

During the Cold War "space race," scientists competed.

O The "space race" was a Cold War competition by

scientists.

|

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Ismael Dudley · Answer 1

The ''space race'' by competing scientists occurred during the Cold War.

Explanation:

This sentence draws attention to the object of the action because the object in this case is the space race. This sentence uses the verb occur which applies directly to the space race. The information about who performed the action and when it was performed are contained within prepositional phrases. This allows the information to be secondary and not the main focus of the sentence.