Which thesis statement is well worded?

A) five percent of the federal budget should be used to make businesses more energy efficient to prevent an energy crisis.

B) At least 26% of the federal budget should be used to prevent an energy crisis and pollution.

C) The federal budget must be used to prevent an energy crisis before people are left without electricity.

D) it is important to prevent an energy crisis due to inefficient energy use as many people would die without electricity.

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Issac Horne

10 November, 23:13

Which thesis statement is well worded?

A) five percent of the federal budget should be used to make businesses more energy efficient to prevent an energy crisis.

B) At least 26% of the federal budget should be used to prevent an energy crisis and pollution.

C) The federal budget must be used to prevent an energy crisis before people are left without electricity.

D) it is important to prevent an energy crisis due to inefficient energy use as many people would die without electricity.

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Azkaban · Answer 1

I believe C is the best worded, although D can also be considered

Arroyo · Answer 2

C would be the best thesis statement. You wouldn't want to have any type of statistics in your thesis statement; leave that for your paragraphs. Therefore, A and B can be crossed out. D doesn't really show any sort of claim, and seems to be more like a persuasive sentence to provoke guilt in the reader.