English

Jenny Donaldson

10 January, 01:38

Read this excerpt from a student's analytical essay.

The nursery rhymes that Alice recites in the story come true afterward, which is really weird and interesting to me.

Which is the best revision of this informal sentence?

Some of the nursery rhymes recited by Alice may be familiar to readers, because they are well-known.

The weirdness of the nursery rhymes coming to life after Alice recites them needs to be remembered.

It is especially significant that nursery rhymes come true after Alice recites them.

I cannot believe that nursery rhymes actually happen after Alice recites them to herself.