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1 February, 04:47

Which revision best corrects the sentence? Paula is moving to Chicago winters are cold there. Paula is moving to Chicago, where winters are cold. Paula is moving to Chicago, so winters are cold there. Paula is moving to Chicago; however, winters are cold there.

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  1. 1 February, 05:49
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    Paula is moving to Chicago, where winters are cold. is da correct answer
  2. 1 February, 07:07
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    Paula is moving to Chicago, where winters are cold.

    The first option is not correct because it combines two complete ideas into one sentence without the appropriate punctuation. The third option does not work because the conjunction "so" does not effectively show the relationship between the two ideas. It makes it sound as though Chicago is cold because Paula moved there. The last sentence also is not correct because the use of "however" changes the meaning of the sentence. The second option is best because it effectively connects the ideas without changing meaning.
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