So i'm writing a poem for English and I wanted to know if this is good?

Feeling

I can't seem to breathe

You don't have a clue

I can achieve

Anything

when I'm with you

I don't know this feeling

But with you they start revealing

When I'm hurt you pop out of nowhere

And make the pain disappear

Only you can make me happy

I like how you are classy

Maybe it's this teen thing

But it turns out you were apart of a silly dream

(at first it was supposed to be about being underwater, but since it's Valentines day, it turned into love.)

Feeling

I can't seem to breathe

You don't have a clue

I can achieve

Anything

when I'm with you

I don't know this feeling

But with you they start revealing

When I'm hurt you pop out of nowhere

And make the pain disappear

Only you can make me happy

I like how you are classy

Maybe it's this teen thing

But it turns out you were apart of a silly dream

Response : This is very heartfelt. I enjoyed reading this. I also enjoyed how you went on to explain "Maybe it's this teen thing." This poem gets a 9/10 stars because it could be better, although it is amazing. You have a talent!

Silly and funny is ur answer