Revise this paragraph by circling repeated words, and replacing at least three of them with synonyms.

When I go to see a performance I like to sit up close so I can see well. It is exciting to see the performances of the actors and actresses. Seeing the action is very important to me. It's important to me not to miss one minute of the play.

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Edith Compton

9 July, 15:56

Revise this paragraph by circling repeated words, and replacing at least three of them with synonyms.

When I go to see a performance I like to sit up close so I can see well. It is exciting to see the performances of the actors and actresses. Seeing the action is very important to me. It's important to me not to miss one minute of the play.

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Heath Ayers · Answer 1

The repeated words in the given paragraph above are: see, performance, and important. Here is the revised paragraph:

When I go to witness a show, I like to sit up close so I can see well. It is exciting to watch the performances of the actors and actresses. Seeing the action is very significant to me. It's important to me not to miss one minute of the play.