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12 January, 23:41

Does this poem sound cheesy? Is there anything I should change?

My imaginary friend

Makes me feel so grand.

She always smiles,

she gives me great advice.

She knows everything I like

There's no one I would want to be with,

than with my brand new friend.

She'll be there when I'm sad.

If I'm already happy, is

she'll find a way to make me happier.

I love my friend

And she loves me

And we'll always support each other,

Until the very end.

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  1. 13 January, 00:15
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    No i don't think that it sounds cheesy at all. relatable if anything
  2. 13 January, 03:05
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    I love it and no it definitely does not sound cheese!
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