Why does the summary need to be revised?

As a result of a volcanic eruption, Enkai and the cattle were thrown into the sky. Enkai wanted to save his cattle. He grew a tree that bridged the sky and the earth. The cattle walked down the tree to Neiterkob. Neiterkob and the Maasai tribe took over caring for the cattle.

A) The summary incorrectly restates the central idea.

B) The summary includes too many minor details.

C) The summary lacks transitions that connect ideas

D) The summary is missing important words and phrases.

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Angela Rasmussen

29 August, 10:27

Why does the summary need to be revised?

As a result of a volcanic eruption, Enkai and the cattle were thrown into the sky. Enkai wanted to save his cattle. He grew a tree that bridged the sky and the earth. The cattle walked down the tree to Neiterkob. Neiterkob and the Maasai tribe took over caring for the cattle.

A) The summary incorrectly restates the central idea.

B) The summary includes too many minor details.

C) The summary lacks transitions that connect ideas

D) The summary is missing important words and phrases.

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Milo Wong · Answer 1

I think the reason why the summary need to be revised is : C. the summary lacks transitions that connect ideas

For example, we need to add transition between - enkai wanted to save his cattle - and - He grew a tree that bridged the sky and the earth-