Francis had a lot on his mind that afternoon, he was concerned about his mother's illness and about losing his job.

Is this correct punctuation

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Joyce Higgins

14 January, 15:49

Francis had a lot on his mind that afternoon, he was concerned about his mother's illness and about losing his job.

Is this correct punctuation

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Deborah Waller · Answer 1

I wouldn't say it is correct.

The correct version could be:

Francis had a lot on his mind that afternoon - he was concerned about his mother's illness and about losing his job.

Or:

Francis had a lot on his mind that afternoon; he was concerned about his mother's illness and about losing his job.

Francis had a lot on his mind that afternoon, he was concerned about his mother's illness and about losing his job.Is this correct punctuation

Francis had a lot on his mind that afternoon, he was concerned about his mother's illness and about losing his job.

Is this correct punctuation