Will someone proof read something for me?

Hey, I've correct a few words and add some comas to some. Look over it.

Once upon a time, there was this beautiful couple who wanted to have a baby and a baby they were going to have indeed. It didn’t matter how far and how long this man had to look to find a baby for his wife. He searched high, and he looked low, and no one wanted to give this man their baby, and no one wanted to keep their baby. There was this place that people would go that was going to have a bay, and they would go and give birth and leave. No one ever knew what happened to the babies that went to the

Baby not bay second to last line.

Good story, keep up the good work; )