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6 September, 09:13

Driving to the fair was a troublesome, difficult situation today. We planned on leaving at 5:30 p. m., which was unfortunately during rush hour. The traffic would be horrible and we did not want to be stuck. We decided to consult a map in an attempt to find an alternative route.

Which sentence should be rewritten to improve the clarity of the paragraph?

sentence 1

sentence 2

sentence 3

sentence 4

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  1. 6 September, 09:35
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    I believe sentence 3 should be rewritten due to clarity; for example "The traffic would be horrible and we did not want to be a stuck in a traffic jam" would be exact.
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