Tempted by the delicious-looking chocolate, the diet went out the window.

Which revision most effectively corrects the dangling modifier in the sentence?

Tempted, the delicious-looking chocolate made the diet go out the window.

Tempted by the delicious-looking chocolate, I let my diet go out the window.

Going out the window, the diet was tempted by the delicious-looking chocolate.

Letting the diet go out the window tempted by the delicious-looking chocolate.

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Tyrell Sparks

23 September, 11:36

Tempted by the delicious-looking chocolate, the diet went out the window.

Which revision most effectively corrects the dangling modifier in the sentence?

Tempted, the delicious-looking chocolate made the diet go out the window.

Tempted by the delicious-looking chocolate, I let my diet go out the window.

Going out the window, the diet was tempted by the delicious-looking chocolate.

Letting the diet go out the window tempted by the delicious-looking chocolate.

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Cash Davenport · Answer 1

The revision that corrects the dangling modifier in the sentence is the second sentence: Tempted by the delicious-looking chocolate, I let my diet go out the window.

Your answer is: Tempted by the delicious-looking chocolate, I let my diet go out the window

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