Read the paragraph. (1) As I absorbed the many emotions surrounding me, I felt a wave of pride wash over me. (2) We had done our best and had valiantly fought until the end, never once doubting or giving up. (3) Our fan support had been phenomenal. (4) Although we had lost, everyone filed out of the bleachers with their heads held high and a good feeling in their hearts. Which revision would best improve the paragraph?

Replace "good" with "warm" in sentence 4.

Add the sentence, "We led most of the game."

Combine sentence 1 and sentence 2.

Delete sentence 4 from the paragraph.

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Alena Sims

4 September, 22:13

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Jaidyn Moody · Answer 1

I would replace good with warm to make the sentence more descriptive

Martin Watson · Answer 2

He is correct

I would replace good with warm to make the sentence more descriptive