Glittering jewelry always catches my eye. If I am shopping and I spot a sparkling necklace, I check to see how much it costs. By saving my allowance, I can often buy new costume jewelry. Once I even found a beautiful engraved bracelet at a yard sale. I was thrilled!

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Stephanie Bonilla

8 October, 08:10

Glittering jewelry always catches my eye. If I am shopping and I spot a sparkling necklace, I check to see how much it costs. By saving my allowance, I can often buy new costume jewelry. Once I even found a beautiful engraved bracelet at a yard sale. I was thrilled!

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Jazlene Lester · Answer 1

Glittering jewelry always catches my eye. If I am shopping, and I spot a sparkling necklace, I check to see how much the necklace would cost. By saving my allowance, I can often buy a new custom jewelry. Once, I even found a beautiful bracelet at a yard sale. I was thrilled!

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