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Aden Blake

3 January, 17:27

Read the excerpt from a student's essay

Which is the best revision of the concluding sentence?

Putting on a bike helmet is the most important part of

preparing for a bicycle ride. Helmets protect the brain and

neck. They have been proven to reduce injuries by over 50

percent. It is important that helmets fit properly and that

fasteners work correctly. I wear a helmet with a spider-web

design

O Bike helmets are important because they protect riders

when worn properly.

O Bike helmets with spider-web designs are the most

effective

O Bike helmets have been known to cause accidents

O Bike helmets are expensive, but they are a good

investment