Read the sentences from a student's essay about "The Treasure of Lemon Brown."

In this story, Lemon Brown make a great impact on Greg by showing him the value of the bond between fathers and sons. Greg then appreciates his own father better, despite his father's shortcomings.

What is the best way to revise the last sentence?

replace "Greg then" with "In conclusion, Greg"

replace "Greg then" with "Therefore, Greg"

replace "Greg then" with "Consequently, Greg"

replace "Greg then" with "So, Greg"

the answer is: replace "Greg then" with "Consequently, Greg"

The best way to revise the last sentence is is by using "So Greg"

Step-by-step explanation:

In the story the narrator makes Greg understand the bond between the father and son and because of the narrators effort Greg is able to appreciate his relationship with his father, ignoring his father's shortcoming's

so the statement can be revised as

In this story, Lemon Brown make a great impact on Greg by showing him the value of the bond between fathers and sons. So Greg appreciates his own father better, despite his father's shortcomings.