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Which of these sentences would add vivid words to a narrative about a camping trip?

A) During the rainstorm, the water went down the sides of the tent, and we heard a bird singing in a tree.

B) The rain rushed like a river down the tent's sides, and we heard a lovely song from a wren in a tree.

C) The rain ran down the sides of our tent, and we heard a bird singing in the trees.

D) The rain poured down around the tent, and a bird was tweeting in nearby trees.

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Alana Mcmillan

18 September, 23:40

7)

Which of these sentences would add vivid words to a narrative about a camping trip?

A) During the rainstorm, the water went down the sides of the tent, and we heard a bird singing in a tree.

B) The rain rushed like a river down the tent's sides, and we heard a lovely song from a wren in a tree.

C) The rain ran down the sides of our tent, and we heard a bird singing in the trees.

D) The rain poured down around the tent, and a bird was tweeting in nearby trees.

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Timothy Bautista · Answer 1

B) The rain rushed like a river down the tent's sides, and we heard a lovely song from a wren in a tree.

Explanation:

The sentence that would add a vivid description to the narration is that the " the rain rushed like a river down the tent's sides, and we heard a lovely song from a wren in a tree."

Vivid words are very descriptive and they provide a detailed insight into a narration. They are used to represent lucid and chimerical details in a better way.

We can see that the second option provides us with a depth of narration from all the elements used.

The rush of the river and the description of the song type by the specific bird in the tree furnishes our imagination with details of this trip event.